Rana shrugged out of her backpack and unzipped it. She pulled out several water bottles and energy bars. “Anyone want a snack?” Snack! My belly grumbled so loud it sounded like a toad with a...
And then it exploded. Not the toilet. That would’ve been deadly with all those sharp porcelain shards flying around. But the water inside it. It exploded upward like a geyser. Like Old Faithful at Yellowstone National Park. This was the disgusting bathroom toilet...
Some bolts got cranked that made it astounding. Some nuts got tightened that made it astonishing. Altogether, the changes made it astoundonishing! And it’ll be off to the beta readers...
“What is that?” Ben whispered. “How should I know?” I snapped back. The heat and the not knowing was getting to me. I was losing my patience like a bad emergency room...
The first draft of The Pharaoh’s Curse is finished! Whew. That was a challenging march. 100% done by dictation and felt as clumsy as a drunken zombie. On to the first edit...